为了达到以赛促学、提高大学生写作能力的目的，第三届“外文奖”写作大赛将开展赛前段落练习热身活动，请根据以下练习题目、题目解析、段落练习要求完成单个段落的写作。

说明：此次练习仅供提升写作能力，与正式参赛成绩不关联。已报名和未报名学生都可参加，优秀参与作品将在官方渠道展示，同时获奖者将得到纪念礼品一份。

In some industries, individuals with practical experience but lower academic qualifications can earn higher salaries than university graduates. Some people argue that formal education is becoming less relevant to career success, while others believe academic achievements remain vital for long-term professional development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

在一些行业中，拥有实践经验但学历较低的从业者可能比大学毕业生赚取更高薪资。有人认为正规教育对职业成功的重要性正在减弱，而另一些人则认为学术成就对长期职业发展仍然至关重要。讨论双方观点并给出自己的看法。

本次热身活动写作题目聚焦于“学历与收入的非对称性现象”，给出了两方观点：
① Some people argue that formal education is becoming less relevant to career success（支持“经验优先”）
② while others believe academic achievements remain vital for long-term professional development（支持“学历必要”）

请选择任意一方观点，构思一个段落，字数要求80-150words。

段落结构需包含：
▷ Topic Sentence （明确的主题句）

▷ Explanation & Elaboration（论点展开）

▷ Concrete Example（具体例子）

▷ Analysis（分析例子）

Some people believe that children will have a bright future if they are always rewarded by their parents and teachers when they behave well. （论证奖励对孩子的有利影响）

ps：为了培养学生充分独立思考的能力，示例段落论点与热身活动题目不同，仅供参考段落结构。

六、满分段落示例

Rewards are an important tool that is used by parents to reinforce positive behaviour in children.(Topic Sentence )Children who are rewarded for positive actions are more likely to repeat the behaviour and therefore rewards can be a powerful way of encouraging children. However, it is critical that rewards are proportionate to the action otherwise rewards may distort children's behaviour.(Explanation & Elaboration) For example, performing a simple task such or not engaging in previously discouraged behaviour should be encouraged through praise and acknowledgement rather than by gifts.(Concrete Example) However, when children perform significant acts that require patience and discipline such as passing an exam or achieving to their potential at school it may be appropriate to reward them with a gift. In this way children can be taught that the greater the effort and achievement the greater the reward.(Analysis)